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Wednesday, 16 October 2013

Book Excerpt: Deception Peak by Dianne Lynn Gardner - part of the INSPIRING TEENS BLOG HOP – 14-19 October




INSPIRING TEENS BLOG HOP – 14-19 October



AUTHOR’S COMMENTARY


The first book of a trilogy, Deception Peak is a young adult adventure fantasy about a teenager, Ian Wilson, who follows his father through a portal that magically appears on their computer screen. They travel into a deceptively beautiful Realm, where horses run free, the wind sings prophetic melodies, and their computer avatars come to life. But when the two are separated, Ian is abducted by a tribe of dragon worshipers and is forced to find his courage. As he struggles for his freedom and embarks on a perilous search to find his father, Ian meets the true peacekeepers of the Realm. It's then that he learns there is a greater purpose for being there.
The Ian’s Realm Saga was inspired mostly from the fantasy stories I read as a child. Alice in Wonderland, The Wizard of OZ, Peter Pan, Narnia, as well as adventure stories like Huckleberry Finn and Swiss Family Robinson. I love the worlds where there is enough beauty to enchant the reader, yet enough danger to make the trip an adventure.
My grandsons were also an inspiration. I love being a grandma, but in some ways it’s nerve wracking because you can’t get in between mom and child even if you see something amiss. I know that growing up is a difficult thing to do, and it seems that for boys these days it’s even more difficult. So with my love for fantasy stories (C.S. Lewis, Tolkein, Carroll) and my passion for the teenager, I decided to write a book that boys would like to read about a character that is struggling just like they are but in a fantastical world, hoping it would give them a little more confidence knowing things aren’t really as bad as they appear to be.


BOOK EXCERPT

The air was still. The only sound was the soft babble of the creek, no owl’s cry, no frogs, no mosquitoes; no other sound whatsoever save the crackle of the fire. As the night wore on, Ian had trouble staying awake. When his father offered him his blanket, he was able to relax. Weary, he laid his head on his saddle and wrapped up, clutching the hilt of his sword. Soon, even though he didn’t mean to, Ian fell into a deep sleep.He dreamed he was riding an eight-point buck elk through the woods galloping past villages where chimneys of round houses made of hide released little puffs of blue smoke. Children wearing colorful costumes played on cobblestone roads and waved as he cantered by. The elk galloped to the shore of an ocean and went airborne. Shiny silver fish jumped beneath him as they flew over a fleet of ships sailing toward the horizon. They soared through the sky. Ian held onto its withers, fearless as they flew above the clouds toward the stars and the moon. The elk turned toward earth again, faster and faster they traveled until the wind whistled in their ears and Ian heard a melody.
Brave on little soldier, brave into the night
Your journeys before you, your song’s in the light
For many you seek and many you save
Though darkness surrounds you, and powers are great
Though night overcomes the sweetness of day
Brave on through despair, Press on in the fight
The tunnel of grieving, imprisoned by might
The worst will be over and darkness will ebb
You will aft find your way, and wake up in your bed.

When he landed, the wind was still singing, but now the voices were coming from the mountain. A woman mourned. His dad walked toward the sound and the steep foreboding cliffs.
“Dad, where are you going?”
His father turned around. “Your mom’s in trouble up there,” he said before he disappeared into the brush.
Howls of wolves cried in the night over faint human pleas. “Help me, please, someone.”
Ian dropped the wood that he used to poke at the fire, and called for his dad, but no answer returned. Instead, a cold hand grabbed him and covered his mouth, and then his world went dark.
Ian opened his eyes, panicking. “Dad?”
The thick smell of burnt wood hung over his head.
“Right here, son.”
The embers glowed. There was one small branch that lay on top of the coals, emitting a thin stream of smoke into the air. His father had just stoked the fire.
“Did you have a dream?” Alex asked gently.
Ian nodded and sat up. Sweat trickled down the side of his brow into his ears. “I don’t like this place. I can’t sleep.” His voice shook.
“It will be dawn soon. We’ll saddle at first light and head for home. There’s coffee in the pot if you want to stay up with me.”
Ian reached for a cup.


Author's Biography
 
Dianne Gardner, an award winning author, is also an illustrator living in the Pacific Northwest, USA. She's an active member of the Society of Children's Book Writers and Illustrators, and the National League of American Pen Women. Dianne has many ribbons for her portrait and plein air paintings, and uses her talents to illustrate her stories. Books by Dianne are the Ian’s Realm Saga: Deception Peak, The Dragon Shield, and Rubies and Robbers four short stories in the A Tale of the Four Wizards series.  She writes for middle grade and young adults targeting boys and adventure loving girls, and the young at heart.
You can see more of Dianne’s work on her website http://gardnersart.com


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Deception Peak purchase link on Amazon http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00FCZ32MG
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BOOK GIVEAWAY
An ebook of Deception Peak

Book description
Newly edited, Deception Peak, Amazon's best seller two months in a row, has a face lift and it's better than ever now. Having combed through the edits, added some action, toughened Ian up and even gave him a better attitude toward Abbi, (something his fans have been asking for), you won't want to miss this version! I think you'll like what PDMI Rara Avis has done to spiff up Book I of the Ian's Realm Saga! And now, The Tale of the Four Wizards, Patriarchs of the Realm Silvio is a bonus feature with this book (and the other shorts will be included in the sequels) so you don't miss any of the tale.

The first book of the Saga, Deception Peak is a young adult adventure fantasy about a teenager, Ian Wilson, who follows his father through a portal that magically appears on their computer screen. They travel into a deceptively beautiful Realm, where horses run free, the wind sings prophetic melodies, and their computer avatars come to life. But when the two are separated, Ian is abducted by a tribe of dragon worshipers and is forced to find his courage. As he struggles for his freedom and embarks on a perilous search to find his father, Ian meets the true peacekeepers of the Realm. It's then that he learns there is a greater purpose for being in there. 

This special edition is a completely revised and re-edited version, complete with beautiful, custom illustrations by Dianne Gardener and formatting design by PDMI Publishing. This special one year anniversary re-release includes the action packed short story 'Silvio: A Tale of the Four Wizards'.

Amazon US link­­    http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00FCZ32MG

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Wednesday, 24 July 2013

Excerpt from Blind Sight – Book one in The Celadon Circle series by Nicole Storey



Blood and screaming; screaming and blood. The horrors of the image before her assault Jordan’s senses, overwhelming them to the point where she must scream herself. It wouldn’t matter if she did -- the young girl fighting for her life wouldn’t hear her.  Neither would the monster dismantling her body piece by agonizing piece.
She’d fought valiantly. The girl – she couldn’t be more than sixteen – obviously wasn’t the type to roll over and die. The monster liked that. Fear made her flesh sweeter. Her hair is plastered to her head with sweat. Her breathing labored, coming in short gasps. Tears cut tracks through the grime and muck on her face. Jordan figured she’d been on the run for at least an hour or more.
Her time is coming to an end, though. The blood loss is too great – she’s weak. Jeans, which were once faded blue, are a saturated burgundy now. She had lost what was left of her shirt a while back. Strips of skin flap loosely above and below her bra strap. She’s barely able to stumble through the trees. The monster allows her to get as far as fifty feet away before it pounces again, using powerful claws to rake what’s left of the flesh from her back. Its long, black tongue snakes out, lapping up her blood. Its putrid body shivers in ecstasy under the bloated moon.
The girl barely whimpers this time, but sound carries in the silent woods. The monster stops feeding long enough to place a gnarled, heavy foot on her back, snapping it like dry timber.   There will be no more running for either of them this night.
Enormous wings unfurl from the creature’s body, webbed and veined -- not unlike those of a bat. Fully spanned, they reach at least twelve feet across. Jordan knows she must get a closer look. With the thought, her body moves, drifting on the currents of the gentle breeze created by the pines and oaks. Soon, too soon, she is floating right above it. 
As if it can hear or sense something is near, the thing raises its massive head, sniffing the air. Its face resembles a gibbon, but the mouth is wider – distorted and stretched to hold rows of wicked-sharp teeth. Yellow eyes capture the moonlight, reflecting it like any other animal, only more brightly. Its body is covered in gray feathers or scales coated in a slimy substance. The smell is unbelievable – a mixture of skunk, feces, and ammonia that make her eyes water. Jordan’s seen enough.
Before she moves away, she takes one last look at the girl lying broken on the ground before her.  She is bruised and shattered, her blonde hair streaked red with blood. Was she beautiful before? Maybe she was a cheerleader for her school’s football team. She could have been a straight -- A student on her way to a full scholarship to Vassar. It didn’t matter. She was someone’s daughter, perhaps a big sister…someone’s friend. Jordan wishes she could comfort her, stroke her brow or squeeze her hand – something to let her know she isn’t dying alone. However, it is against the rules. The most she can do is make sure her death is not in vain.
As she moves away from the nightmare, the creature lets loose a scream, raising goose bumps along her arms. AhOOOoool! Probably a victory yell for a successful hunt, Jordan thinks to herself, wishing she could sink a silver knife in its gullet. She feels herself begin to fade from this time and place, a sensation of being guided somewhere else. Go ahead and celebrate, you bastard. That poor girl will be your last meal.


I have always been a huge fan of anything supernatural, paranormal, or just plain spooky. I’m the type who will sit through hours of Lost Tapes on Animal Planet and Monster Week. When deciding on a paranormal-type monster for my book, I decided to research cryptozoology for creatures people have actually claimed to have seen. The one in the excerpt is called a Kongamato. Descriptions of it vary, depending on what part of the world the people are from who witnessed it. I chose a description that would best fit in with my story. Does it really exist? I can’t say for sure, but considering how many times it has been seen soaring in the sky or perched on branches of trees as it waits for unsuspecting prey to wonder by…I wouldn’t count it out.



Author Bio and Contact Links



Nicole Storey lives in Georgia with her wonderful husband, two prodigious kids, and a plethora of pets. When she isn’t traveling to magical realms with potty-mouthed pixies or fighting demons, she enjoys reading and reviewing books, gardening, cooking, and planning for her favorite holiday – Halloween! She is an author of juvenile fantasy and YA paranormal books and is published with Inknbeans Press. Her books can be found on Amazon, Barnes and Noble, Kobo, Sony, and Smashwords in e-book and paperback.

Contact Nicole:
Amazon Author Page: http://amzn.to/KThYif
Official Website: http://bit.ly/15oJb2y

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