All's Well That Ends Well - A Cautionary
Author's Tale
by Vonnie Winslow Crist
In March 2006, I'd completed 3 chapters of The
Enchanted Skean, a young adult fantasy novel, when I read about an
opportunity to meet with Agent F (name withheld) at a regional writers'
conference. As directed, I quickly sent in my 1st chapter and the
fee. I attended the conference 2 weeks later, eager for feedback from New York
City's Agent F as to the appeal of the book's beginning, and what direction she
thought the novel should take.
When I walked into the meeting with Agent
F, she stood, shook my hand, and said, “Great beginning, I want to represent
the book. When can I have the full manuscript?”
As I sat down, I realized I'd misread the
manuscript review specs – I now knew only completed books were eligible.
But I didn't want to admit to Agent F what I'd done, so I responded, “How about
I send you the first 6 chapters of The Enchanted Skean, so you can be
sure you're interested in reading the rest of the book?”
“Fine,” she said. “I'll watch for them in
my email on Monday.” Then, she discussed all the things she liked about Chapter
I, and asked questions about the rest of the book.
I returned home that Saturday, and stayed
up late trying to pull together six well-written chapters. Sunday was spent
polishing Chapters I Through VI. After emailing Agent F the 6 chapters, I
worked on The Enchanted Skean every spare moment. I was teaching part
time and taking classes at a local university in my last semester of a Masters
in Professional Writing Program, so when Agent F got back to me in 10 days
wanting the full book, I told her I needed to focus on my Masters classes till
mid-May, and promised her the novel by June.
Needless to say, I wrote, revised, and
re-wrote like crazy. By June, I had a 95,000-word novel sent off to Agent F.
Then, I waited. In late August 2006, Agent F's rewrite suggestions arrived. I
worked on those, then sent The
Enchanted Skean back to her. More revision suggestions, 2 assistants
and their revision suggestions, and apparent troubles at the agency drew the
process out until July 2009 when the agency folded.
Sigh. Back to no agent. I couldn't find
another interested agent, and most publishers weren't allowing unagented
manuscript submissions.
So, I set aside the YA novel, and focused
on writing and submitting short stories to speculative magazines and
anthologies. After several were published, I began putting together a fantasy
short story collection. I completed The Greener Forest in late 2010, and
found a new small press publisher, Cold Moon Press, looking for a fantasy
manuscript. In Spring 2011, The Greener Forest was published to good
reviews, but little visibility.
I started looking for guest blogging,
interview, and review opportunities. It took lots of time, and kept me from my
writing. Therefore, I cut back on promotion, and again wrote and submitted
science fiction and fantasy tales to various publications. Cold Moon Press then
published 2 of those tales as ebooks, and expressed interest in a 2nd
short story collection. I began work on Owl Light in the hopes it would
be published in late 2012 by CMP.
Meanwhile, I dug out and dusted off The
Enchanted Skean. I researched some Indie publishers who were interested in
YA fantasy, and sent the manuscript off. After several “Close, but not quite
right for us” responses, I finally got a “Yes” from Mockingbird Lane Press. By
June 2012, I found myself commited to 2 publishers. The editor at Mockingbird
Lane Press was insightful and demanding, and I had to do 3 revisions to meet
her standards, but I knew The Enchanted Skean would be a better book
because of her editing.
Owl Light
was also progessing nicely. In addition to revising the stories to meet the
expectations of the editor at CMP, I painted the cover art and drew over 2
dozen illustrations for inside the book. But it became evident as the editing
process at both publishing houses proceded, neither book would be ready before
January 1, 2013. But an author should never complain when a publishing delay will
result in a higher quality book!
And so, my author's tale is a cautionary
one. I've learned: 1- Finish a manuscript before submitting it. 2- Even a
respected agent can retire, and a credible agency can close. 3- Just because it
was easy to find an agent the 1st time, doesn't mean it will be easy
again. 4- Keep working on your writing rather than tie all your hopes to one
book. 5- Indie press is more accessible and often friendlier to new writers
than the big houses. 6- Don't over commit yourself. 7- Set reasonable deadlines
for your projects. 8- Promotion is important, but you're a writer – make sure
and work on your creative writing, too. 9- Blogs are a good way to reach out to
readers and meet fellow writers, so be thankful for those opportunities. And
lastly, all's well that ends well.
Here's to January 2013 when The Enchanted Skean
and Owl Light will join The Greener Forest on my Amazon author's
page. Plus, I'm already roughing out 3 new books. One of them will suddenly
demand to be written next, and I'll put my nose to the grindstone again. Thank
you to David Lowbridge & Indie Ebook Review for hosting me, and thanks to
each of you for reading my author's tale..
Born in the Year of the Dragon, Vonnie Winslow Crist has had a life-long interest in reading, writing, art, myth, fairytales, folklore, and legends. Having been a night person since infancy, she is quite fond of stars, moonlight, forests, owls, and other creatures of the darkness.After earning a Bachelor of Science degree in Art Education from Towson University, she married, then raised three children, did freelance illustrating and writing, and taught poetry for the Maryland State Arts Council’s Artists in Education Program. Thirty years after graduating from Towson, she returned to her alma mater and earned a Masters in Professional Writing.A firm believer that the world around us is filled with miracles, mystery, and magic, Vonnie still sees fairies amidst the trees, mermaids on jetties, and ghosts and goblins of all sorts in the shadows. Her garden overflows with herbs and statues of animals. Toadstool rings sprout regularly on her lawn. And she's found so many four-leafed clovers, that she keeps them in a jar.
Website: http://vonniewinslowcrist.com
Twitter: http://twitter.com/VonnieWCrist
Another thing to consider is a literary agent.
ReplyDeleteNot that >I< have one, hell...I haven't even been able to land a publisher, let alone an agent. :3
We'll see though - got some good advice recently, and I do believe I'm gonna start slammin' it that way. Honestly, all I NEED is good marketing at this point in time...XD
Most publishers wont accept authors without an agent. It is best to look for one before submitting to publishers if you wish to published traditionally.
ReplyDeleteThanks, David, for inviting me to guest post. Thomas, in an ideal world, we'd all get agents 1st. (As I did, though it didn't work out). But many small press publishers and a few of the bigger companies still look at slush piles submissions. Check marketing guides to see who is open. www.ralan.com is a good beginning place.
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